I got a little bored today so I started a script from scratch and thought I might aswell turn it into a mini blog series (expect many many more series to come). Every week I'll continue the story, lets just see how far I go. MEN ON THE ROAD: PART 1.
Part 1 - It's My House
JANE
Decisions Julian! That’s what this is all about, I make a suggestion and you decide whether its good for you or not. Im sick of it!
Listen, lets not even try and play the blame game, it's not cute anymore! I specifically told you I was going out with the guys this weekend, in fact one week ago. I remember it like it was yesterday
You fool!...It was yesterday!
Yeah…well, I'll be back tomorrow evening, if you still want to go out we’ll go, and can you please stop shouting in public? it's embarassing
JANE
No I tell you what's embarassing, a husband who cares more about his personal demands than the poignant needs of his family
JULIAN
First of all.....I dont know what poignant means so Im gonna give you a bly on disrespectful terminology.... Second but most importantly dont ever question my love for my family. I love you all but this weekend is Julian time, and in Julian time it’s all about Julian. Julian walks off smiling
Only if you want to, but knowing you that would just be a bonus
No love a bonus would be you lasting more than three minutes!
Ex...Excuse me. Erm...What, what’s that supposed to mean?
It means I’ve seen adverts that last longer than you!
JULIAN
Wow you're really looking for that fight aint you? Im not too scared to shake you!....I'll tell the judge it was self-defence
Well you can think about that while you're driving with your friends, this conversation is over as fast as your bed antics
JULIAN
No it's over when I..Jane slams the front door. ...it's over
Julian makes his way back to the car fuming. He sits inside and grimaces while he takes off the top of his adidas tracksuit. Mumbling to himself, he starts the car and begins to drive...
4 comments so far....:
Very good! Funny and enganging. I eagery await part 2.
BERRY GOOOD!
Yep, im liking it - i could picture it in my head, signals of a good story. Roll on part two!
Mr Mayne strikes again! I can already envisage it on a screen. well done. i look forward to reading the rest
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