Part 14 - Conflicts Of Morals
Well on their way to the tournament, Nadine and the boys sit comfortably in Julian's Ford Focus. As he speeds down the motorway there's an air of silence; the male faces are covered in annoyed expressions apart from Ritchie who is sporting a wide grin. Nadine looks around and senses she is an unwelcome guest on the journey. Ritchie puts his arm round her and she rolls her eyes as she begins to ease the tension in the car...Nadine
So....Football The boys roll their eyes Yeah..... still ignored Ok so I'm gathering Ritchie supports Arsenal because of his top, Gerald who do you support?
Gerald
Glad you asked, Im pretty fond of Liverp....Julian glares at him erm Liverpool
Nadine
Wow me too!! Julian switches on the radio and gradually turns the volume up I absolutely love Gerrard I think I'd go aS FAR AS SAYING HE'S THE BEST PLAYER IN THE WORLD!!!!
Gerald
Sorry what!?! Nadine reaches to turn Julian's volume down
Nadine
I said I think he's the best player in the world
Julian
Dont ever touch my radio...ever. And behave yourself, Steven Gerrard is overatted
Nadine
Wow someone's a little uptight
Ritchie
Nevermind him whispers in her ear female problems
Julian
I do not have female problems alright? alright
Nadine
Why is your lip quivering?
Gerald
That's what I've been saying? She's genius!!
Julian Would you just shut up with the lip? please!
Nadine
So what's wrong?.....Silence
Ritchie
He's having a problem with longevity
Nadine & Sebastian
Woooooooow
Julian
Is today one of those days where my business is breaking news worldwide?
Ritchie
It's nothing to be ashamed of. We've all had shortcomingsJulian
Hey I have an idea!! How about a subject change? Would we like that? Yes marvellous. Sebastian and Nadine how do you two no each other?
Ritchie and Gerald
Yeah
Sebastian stutters but is thankfully interrupted by a call. The called ID reads "Kim"
Nadine
You gonna answer that? Sebastian ignores her so she takes the phone off him, answers and puts her hand in his face Hey Kim....Yeah my battery died because of you.....yeah......Oh No! my french lesson I forgot. Could you call her and say it's cancelled?......Thanks....Oh yeah ok. Gives the phone to Sebastian She wants to speak to you
Sebastian ends the phone call and pretends to speak
Sebastian
Yeah, ok...we'll talk later. He switches off his phone
Meanwhile at Jane's house, The girls are still discussing Jane and Julian's argument while watching "Loose Women" on TV...
Michelle
A relationship works both ways, I'm not taking my brother's side at all, he's an asshole. But there must of been something from your side that didn't add up either
Jane
Nothing, nothing at all. I mean we argued but thats part and parcel of married life, I dont need to tell you that. He just made everything an extreme case
Michelle
Kinda like you did this morning with the radio?
Jane
No kinda like he did with the wedding ringMichelle
I'm going to the restroom I'll be back goes upstairs
Natalie
Sometimes things work out for the best. This break is probably needed, to see what else is out there for you
Evelyn
Do you hear yourself Natalie? They have a family together. You cant just move on like that, make things work Pause Relationships involve trust and loyalty. Although trust and loyalty seems to be an issue here
Jane and Natalie look at each other while Evelyn looks at her jacket pocket (condoms inside)
Jane
What do you mean?
Evelyn
Lets just say I sense unfaithfulness but we'll talk about that later Jane and Natalie look confused as Evelyn turns up the volume on the TV. They whisper to each other
Natalie
Pensez-vouz qu'elle connait Sebastian? (Do you think she knows about Sebastian?)
Jane
Non, il ne peut pas etre (No it can't be) Michelle walks down the stairs
Michelle
Did you guys just say Sebastian?......
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2 comments so far....:
Not as long as some of the other parts but engaging nevertheless. I eagerly await the next parts of the series.
Oh My God!!!! Natalie KNOWS!!!! i like the way you gave us a short part so we want more....roll on 15 and 16! good job!
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